We showed our final cut to the class and we got a mostly positive response with a few constructive criticisms.
The tin foil masks were tacky in comparison to the very high quality costume and contrasted with them, it could have possibly worked better with a different material.
Concept - the audience were confused as they wondered if there was a storyline that they were missing, however they understood the idea of escape which is good.
Some Scenes were over used.
Perhaps use more of the silver dress because the shot was stunning.
they thought it was very middle eastern
They thought it was dark, sinister and mysterious, which is very positive as this is the effect we wanted to achieve.
Some thought the ending was too abrupt (I personally think this works).
There were mixed opinions about not including the indian scene we had filmed. The reason behind this was because the two female leads looked very mature and the two actors doing the Indian dancing looked too young.
I believe that the feedback was very helpful because getting secondary opinions is a very important aspect for improving our skills through which we send messages especially.
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